Changes from Rough Edit to Final Draft

After receiving some feedback from our rough edit we decided a few changes needed to be made in order to make it that little bit better. We changed:

• The speed of the titles in order for the audience to clearly read them.
• The number of shots of Gordon Twiginam walking to his office we cut to make the piece shorter.
• The speed of the playground scenes and sped them up in order for the narration to fit in with what was being shown on screen.
• The logo from having Eon productions to studiocanal as this suited our film better as it was an independant film company.
• The length of the music and instead of cutting the music we slowly faded it out as it made it more smooth.